Why is the video rolling? It's on a digital camera. It seems you're trying to slap whatever 'old' and 'retro' effects you can think of, which defeats the point of an A.R.G. as it's meant to be believable to be realistic. The other problem is it's not original, there are way, way too many of these old tape videos already, unless you can make unique in some way, it's going to fall under the radar.